A Midsummer Dream

Elusive sÓft whispers on lavender breeze “cÓme with me, follÓw me, set yÓur heart free” In sun-dappled shade, ‘neath the Óld apple tree, drinking liquor Óf gÓld as it d r i p s through the leaves.
** original colours are green and gold, but it doesn't appear I can do that here. No worries, just hope it doesn't lose too much effect by being black & white :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/21/2010 1:05:00 PM
What a creative and artistic poem. The shape works well with your thoughts. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Karen
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Date: 6/18/2010 11:55:00 PM
wow, one I missed. HAd it been for that shape poetry contest. I very much enjoyed this. LUv Andrea
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Date: 6/14/2010 9:04:00 AM
Hi Sharon! Yes I agree, it is a pity that we have no chance to put colours or to add a picture to our poems. Lovely imagery in your poem! Enjoyed reading it today. Hope you enjoyed watching soccer on TV. I wonder how far the German team will come. Thank you for your kind comments and have a great week...Gert
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Date: 6/13/2010 3:23:00 PM
If there's room enough for two, may I be the one to sit beside you. As we feast on the golden drips, release my heart and capture it's drift > what a gorgeous piece Sharon. To my favs this golden ripe gem goes >> James
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:27:00 AM
super love, love this!! Really happy to see this very creative shape of yours!! I can just pick those apples! & hahaha you are so right about that con-verse of mine--I read about it briefly but I only saw the connection when you pointed it out ;) poor goalkeeper...& thanks, I'm enjoying it ;)--hugs, nikko :)
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:04:00 AM
these shape poems are not always easy to do this was done perfectly and imagery was stunning also thanks for sharing and for your kind comment on my poem keep the creativity flowing
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Date: 6/13/2010 5:31:00 AM
wonderful write once again..
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