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A Midnight Storm

It starts out slow, But then the winds start to blow. Lightning flashes,brighten the night , showing long streams of white. A low rumbling sound, as thunder shakes the ground, Waking the world with its might, Sending small animals running with fright. Harder and harder comes the rain, Causing the trees that are without leaves a strain. Another flash lights the ground, followed by thunder shaking the ground. Sights it does bestrow as rain continues to flow, filling pot holes as it goes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/5/2014 12:56:00 PM
This is a great poem, Ettie. I liked your descriptions of the storm, it made me feel like I was there and experiencing it with you. Well done! Welcome to Poetry Soup!.... Thank you very much for the kind comments on my poem. :)
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 5/6/2014 11:52:00 AM
Your welcome and thank you Kelly-Love Ettie
Date: 5/3/2014 1:57:00 PM
My thoughts and prayers are for the ones who was hit or affected by the storms that went tho early this week ...........i live close by Tupelo MS.......Ill never forget wen it came tho thankful me and my family were fine i count my blessings-Love Ettie
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