A Meteor Shower

Rain the fair maiden rides her white horse across the sky.
She rides so swiftly that you can miss her with each eye.
This woman races across the heavens wearing a silky white gown.
Nobody can see her until after the sun goes down.
Rain can bring the people sorrow or mirth,
as she showers her bright sparkles upon the earth.
No, she is not a Rain of the cloud-bound kind.
Deep into space is where this Rain you will find.



by Robert Pettit  Written for the contest "Rain, the story"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/14/2011 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations Robert on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:36:00 PM
Robert this is an enchanting little lyrical poem. Glad to see it here and congratulations in the contest. LUv , Andrea
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Date: 1/13/2011 1:36:00 PM
I love the direction in which you took this, Robert! My congratulations on your fine win in Constance's Contest! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/13/2011 12:18:00 PM
How clever to have Rain assume the personna of a meteor shower, one that can only be seen at night. Excellent story here. Congratulations on your win, Robert. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/13/2011 6:42:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Constance, Robert
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:22:00 PM
Many Congrats Robert on big win with this imaginative verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:42:00 PM
Congrats Robert on your amazing win in the Rain Story contest with this elegant entry luv.. enjoy another top ten victory for a well written poem my friend...
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