A Messy Face

How arrogant is your jaundiced eye!

                                   Let's humble it with a slap of pie!





Written on 11/22/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Vaso Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:41 AM
I just saw, so I must also say Congrats on win, well deserved! Does that get me another slice? :)
Vaso Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:40 AM
This is so confusing for me, I might become arrogant just to get some more pie!!!!! :) Loved this!
Merryman Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 6:23 PM
Ha! Ha! I like this, Laura! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Leiser Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 4:50 PM
Thanks, Kim! Glad you liked this :)
Haight Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 7:09 PM
Funny! Congratulations on your win, Laura. Hugs, Sandra
Leiser Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 7:22 PM
Thank you, Sandra! Glad you liked this :)
A  Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 6:08 PM
Laura, Congratulations on your awesome and sweet Epigram couplet win. Have yourself a wonderful, blessed Thanksgiving Day. Love SKAT
Leiser Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 7:22 PM
Thanks, Skat! And you have a Happy Thanksgiving, as well :)
Callus Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 4:39 PM
Slamming with humour! Lovely entry and a merited winner! Congratulations, Laura:) // paul
Leiser Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 7:22 PM
Thank you, Paul! Glad you liked it :)
Negron Flores Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 3:44 PM
Congratulations Laura
Leiser Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 7:21 PM
Thank you, Nayda! Glad you liked it :)
Delaney Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 2:09 PM
Congratulations...there are some who do infuriate us so....lol SuZ
Leiser Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 2:47 PM
Thank you, Suzanne. I'm glad you liked it :)
Roper Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations on your win, Laura!
Leiser Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 2:46 PM
Thank you, Eve :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 9:36 AM
LOVED this. Congrats on your win
Leiser Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 2:46 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Glad you liked it :)
Wigley Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 12:37 AM
Yay! Love a bit of slapstick. Good luck in the contest, Laura. Viv x
Leiser Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 10:00 AM
Thanks, Viv! I'm glad you "get it"! :D
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 4:28 PM
very clever Laura - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Leiser Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 4:39 PM
Thank you, Jan :)
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