A Messanger From Hell

I am sitting in my light brown leather reclining chair
after a strenuous day at my office glad to be home
no more stress no wife just my dog Bandit at my side
I'm holding in my right hand  my favorite relaxing drink
a single malt scotch on cracked ice with a twist of lemon

as I was about  to close my eyes just a little past seven
counting the blessings in my life from heaven
then out of the unexpected blue everything changed
never I mean never to be the same again
or maybe I was just going insane

out of the corner of my right eye
what I saw oh God what I saw was something that really 
scared the hell out of me 
as the hairs on the back of my neck stood straight up
and my flesh turned cold

a man dressed all in black and red
with a haunting evil look in his coal black eyes 
I believed he was from the dead
stepped right through a solid wall made of brick an stone
and stood there looking around the room

then looked right through me as though I wasn't there
my dog bandit backed up in fright and hid behind the chair
making noises like I never heard him make before
as my goose bumbled flesh turned cold as ice
I sat paralyzed could not move from my light brown leather reclining chair

then he smiled a shark like pointed toothy grin 
as he placed his gaze my way
and pointed a long gray boney finger right at me
the only sound that I could hear was the beating of my own heart
as though it was going to tare my chest apart

then he spoke in a low evil raspy voice and said
I'll be awaiting you on the other side

then he turned to leave the room
the way he entered by stepping right through a solid wall
made of brick an stone
now I sit here all alone wondering and shaking 
what the hell just happend to me

is there something in my life that I must change 
my life do I have to rearrange 
I do not want to meet that messenger from hell on the other side

this is not a tale I tell
for you may think I'm crazy as hell
but I believe in what I saw
I was visited by a messenger from hell

if there is a lesson to be learned from my story
look into your life and change what will make it right
to travel into the light 
to heaven not hell
when your time ends upon this earth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/15/2011 10:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/11/2011 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win, Dennis
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Date: 8/10/2011 8:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/10/2011 12:52:00 PM
WoW!! What a story! Really good imagery and very well told. Could see the whole thing taking place before my eyes. Great write my friend. You should repost this on Halloween. Ooohoohoohoo!! God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/10/2011 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Judy's contest Dennis. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2011 11:49:00 PM
Well done Dennis. Congratulations
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Date: 8/9/2011 11:37:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest
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Date: 8/7/2011 4:05:00 PM
Terrific write mate...truly scary..love the spiritual aspect of it God is Love and to Love is what we must do so we will not be guilty....with love...old Jack
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