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A Messanger From Hell

I am sitting in my light brown leather reclining chair after a strenuous day at my office glad to be home no more stress no wife just my dog Bandit at my side I'm holding in my right hand my favorite relaxing drink a single malt scotch on cracked ice with a twist of lemon as I was about to close my eyes just a little past seven counting the blessings in my life from heaven then out of the unexpected blue everything changed never I mean never to be the same again or maybe I was just going insane out of the corner of my right eye what I saw oh God what I saw was something that really scared the hell out of me as the hairs on the back of my neck stood straight up and my flesh turned cold a man dressed all in black and red with a haunting evil look in his coal black eyes I believed he was from the dead stepped right through a solid wall made of brick an stone and stood there looking around the room then looked right through me as though I wasn't there my dog bandit backed up in fright and hid behind the chair making noises like I never heard him make before as my goose bumbled flesh turned cold as ice I sat paralyzed could not move from my light brown leather reclining chair then he smiled a shark like pointed toothy grin as he placed his gaze my way and pointed a long gray boney finger right at me the only sound that I could hear was the beating of my own heart as though it was going to tare my chest apart then he spoke in a low evil raspy voice and said I'll be awaiting you on the other side then he turned to leave the room the way he entered by stepping right through a solid wall made of brick an stone now I sit here all alone wondering and shaking what the hell just happend to me is there something in my life that I must change my life do I have to rearrange I do not want to meet that messenger from hell on the other side this is not a tale I tell for you may think I'm crazy as hell but I believe in what I saw I was visited by a messenger from hell if there is a lesson to be learned from my story look into your life and change what will make it right to travel into the light to heaven not hell when your time ends upon this earth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/15/2011 10:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/11/2011 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win, Dennis
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Date: 8/10/2011 8:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/10/2011 12:52:00 PM
WoW!! What a story! Really good imagery and very well told. Could see the whole thing taking place before my eyes. Great write my friend. You should repost this on Halloween. Ooohoohoohoo!! God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/10/2011 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Judy's contest Dennis. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2011 11:49:00 PM
Well done Dennis. Congratulations
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Date: 8/9/2011 11:37:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest
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Date: 8/7/2011 4:05:00 PM
Terrific write mate...truly scary..love the spiritual aspect of it God is Love and to Love is what we must do so we will not be guilty....with love...old Jack
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