A Message Worth Repeating

Love letters forged in the sun-kissed sand,
though formed with sweet sincerity, won’t withstand
mass movements on a busy beach
or wild waves. The cuddling couple will reach
their sweet spot, the splendid shore,
there to leave love’s wondrous words once more
of rich romantic glory galore. 


May 1, 2023
Contest Name: Alliterisen               Placed 1st
Sponsor:Joseph May

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Andrea Dietrich

May 30, 2023 at 12:55 PM

very nicely expressed. Congrats to you.

Janice Canerdy

May 31, 2023 at 5:48 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice

Joseph May

May 29, 2023 at 9:32 AM

I enjoyed this romantic verse Janice, Congrats on your win

Janice Canerdy

May 29, 2023 at 12:32 PM

Joseph, thank you so much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice

Michelle Faulkner

May 1, 2023 at 3:25 PM

I didn't even realize at first which contest this was for, it has such a natural flow, I can feel like I'm on the beach with the warm sand in my toes, sneaking a love note to my sweetie~

Janice Canerdy

May 1, 2023 at 7:47 PM

Thanks SO much, Michelle! This prompt was a real challenge for me. Janice

Jan Allison

May 1, 2023 at 12:53 PM

what a delightful poem Janice I love 5 mins walk from a glorious beach . i must look out for love letters in the sand to inspire me, lovely rhyme and alliteration. i must check out the contest and see if my muse will come out to play:-) hugs Ja xx

Janice Canerdy

May 1, 2023 at 7:46 PM

Thanks SO much, Jan! Writing this poem was a real callenge. Janice