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A Message Worth Repeating

Love letters forged in the sun-kissed sand, though formed with sweet sincerity, won’t withstand mass movements on a busy beach or wild waves. The cuddling couple will reach their sweet spot, the splendid shore, there to leave love’s wondrous words once more of rich romantic glory galore. May 1, 2023 Contest Name: Alliterisen Placed 1st Sponsor:Joseph May June 2, 2023 entered in the Brian Strand Premiere Contest 1221

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2023 12:55:00 PM

very nicely expressed. Congrats to you.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/31/2023 5:48:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice

Joseph May

Date: 5/29/2023 9:32:00 AM

I enjoyed this romantic verse Janice, Congrats on your win

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/29/2023 12:32:00 PM

Joseph, thank you so much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/1/2023 3:25:00 PM

I didn't even realize at first which contest this was for, it has such a natural flow, I can feel like I'm on the beach with the warm sand in my toes, sneaking a love note to my sweetie~

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/1/2023 7:47:00 PM

Thanks SO much, Michelle! This prompt was a real challenge for me. Janice

Jan Allison

Date: 5/1/2023 12:53:00 PM

what a delightful poem Janice I love 5 mins walk from a glorious beach . i must look out for love letters in the sand to inspire me, lovely rhyme and alliteration. i must check out the contest and see if my muse will come out to play:-) hugs Ja xx

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/1/2023 7:46:00 PM

Thanks SO much, Jan! Writing this poem was a real callenge. Janice

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/1/2023 12:39:00 PM

There's nothing more romantic than a sun kissed beach. You rose well to the challenge Janice. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/1/2023 7:45:00 PM

Thanks so much, Tom. This prompt turned out to be VERY challenging! Janice