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I want to be an angel
to be able touch and heal
I want to be an angel
make fair and equal
I want to be angel
give happiness and goodwill
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If everyone would care
then all would be fair
instead theres crime and hate
yet theres no price at the gates
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how much more can our Lord tolerate
please confess before its too late
If only we all would believe
the greatest gift we all would recieve
the ten commandments endure the most
the cost of hell would be much worst
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..... tho i dont belive in hell, i believ we all will b saved and exist n some kind of level in the 
after life, we all learn at different levels and we can make our own hell and  we should help 
one another n n e way we can and leave the rest to God , for God is love not negative and 
not of hate and we r all family , God bless you all, for we r soo much more than we know.:)
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November 30, 2010 at 4:20 AM
Thank you Jennifer for sharing what is in your heart with us. You enable us to see the poet in your writing. Love, Carol
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