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A Merry Chase

Spring starts sets the pace Summer flies then falls behind Autumn takes the wand Primed to win the race Clears three hurdles just to find Winter's grasping hand Cold with no remorse Obstacles o'ercome and then Spring joins in again

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Date: 6/29/2022 2:34:00 PM
I like how you did a chain of haiku to show the seasons in a race, though I don't know where the finish line is! (though it seems winter lasts longer every year)
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 6/30/2022 10:11:00 AM
In this race there is no "finish", Michelle. The seasons just go on and on and on.....Thanks for the read.

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