A Mermaid's Tail --Tale--

Shards of gilded light, so iridescent,
cascading over your perfect shoulders.
Your sensuous form, curled 'to a crescent,
nestled amongst the rocks and the boulders.

You stretch languidly and seek to unfurl,
'fore slowly brushing your locks of pure gold.
Graceful strokes with a comb formed out of pearl,
'tis so entrancing: a sight to behold.

The euphonous lilt of your silvern voice,
carries 'cross the waves and reaches mine ear.
Upon hearing this, I have to rejoice,
a magnum opus, truly without peer.

These feelings of mine, no longer contained;
my passion rises and then carries forth.
"We must be together; it's preordained!
Forsake all others from this day henceforth!"

With a flick of your tail you disappear,
into those briny depths we cannot chart.
Vanished from all sight, I can't interfere;
left nary a trace, 'cept here in my heart.

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June 2014

For the "Mermaids" contest sponsored by Suzanne Delaney - Fifth Place.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 9:13 PM
I had a little extra time so came to search for a poem again and look what I found. One I never read! I absolutely love this one. I don't usually see a mermaid poem this well written, John. I am surprised to see this one got fifth place and not higher, though it was a long time ago and I can't even remember the other winners now!
Michaels Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 6:45 AM
Thanks very much for the great comment, Andrea - and the encouragement about placement!! Kind regards, John.
Ashley Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 1:53 PM
Ohh John, what an enchanting and enticing write. I was captivated by your beautiful imagery and siren's call from start to finish. A wondrously expressed tale and congrats for your winning place in the contest - well deserved for this delectable write! Warmest regards always my talented friend!! ~Susan
Michaels Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 7:38 AM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Susan. Am so pleased this piece hit a chord with you!! Your lovely visits are always appreciated. Kind regards, John!
A   Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 10:43 AM
John, thank you for the reply...Linda
A   Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 10:25 PM
John, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3
Michaels Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 1:57 PM
Thanks, Linda. Hope you liked it!
Gorelick Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 9:07 PM
Apparently your not the first to fall for that siren of the deep. lol... Good job and a big congrats. Bg
Michaels Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 1:53 PM
Thanks for the words of support. Hope you liked it.
Lindley Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 7:47 PM
Big congrats on your fine win!!!
Michaels Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 12:58 PM
Thanks very much for the kind words!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 6:39 AM
This looks like a winner to me! Beautiful write - I can visualize your mermaid! Best wishes with the contest!
Michaels Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 7:26 AM
Thanks so much for the kind comments. I don't produce many rhyming poems, as I tend to write shorter forms, like Haiku and Nonet. Glad you enjoyed it!
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