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A Memory of the Park

At the pretty park, the amber sun was shining,
As I sat among the orange blooms of the June,
Berry blue sky and lake looked to be entwining,
As sunset paused, in its hued, dreamy cocoon.

Joyfully, I watched redbirds and butterflies play,
In one of life's flawless, spontaneous moments,
Myriad and lovely, coming once, and going away.
Allowing to memory hence, precious fragments.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Summers Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 7:20 AM
I like this very much. Fortunately we have some nice parks here with plenty of trails and lots of wildlife. I like your views on making memories. John
Buehler Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Thank you very much for the pleasure of your comment, John. :)
DiMino Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 12:08 PM
"Allowing to memory hence, precious fragments." Love it! Nature never exactly repeats herself twice...with closer meditation, always something newly enchanting.
Buehler Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 3:50 PM
The truth of your words is proven daily, in fresh forays into nature. Thank you for your warm appreciation.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 1:47 AM
What a joyful poem. Loved it.
Buehler Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 10:53 AM
Your thoughts are so much appreciated. :)
Daniel Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 1:11 AM
Indeed a special memory to cherish, Evelyn:)
Buehler Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 10:52 AM
Thank you for a very nice comment. :)
Horsman Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 6:05 PM
LOve those kind of special moments, Evelyn, you bring it forth so majestically. Harry.
Buehler Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 7:45 PM
Thank you for sharing your positive, uplifting thoughts, Harry. :)
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