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At the pretty park, the amber sun was shining, As I sat among the orange blooms of the June, Berry blue sky and lake looked to be entwining, As sunset paused, in its hued, dreamy cocoon. Joyfully, I watched redbirds and butterflies play, In one of life's flawless, spontaneous moments, Myriad and lovely, coming once, and going away. Allowing to memory hence, precious fragments.

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Date: 2/12/2023 7:20:00 AM
I like this very much. Fortunately we have some nice parks here with plenty of trails and lots of wildlife. I like your views on making memories. John
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/12/2023 8:58:00 AM
Thank you very much for the pleasure of your comment, John. :)
Date: 2/9/2023 12:08:00 PM
"Allowing to memory hence, precious fragments." Love it! Nature never exactly repeats herself twice...with closer meditation, always something newly enchanting.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/9/2023 3:50:00 PM
The truth of your words is proven daily, in fresh forays into nature. Thank you for your warm appreciation.
Date: 2/9/2023 1:47:00 AM
What a joyful poem. Loved it.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/9/2023 10:53:00 AM
Your thoughts are so much appreciated. :)
Date: 2/9/2023 1:11:00 AM
Indeed a special memory to cherish, Evelyn:)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/9/2023 10:52:00 AM
Thank you for a very nice comment. :)
Date: 2/8/2023 6:05:00 PM
LOve those kind of special moments, Evelyn, you bring it forth so majestically. Harry.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/8/2023 7:45:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your positive, uplifting thoughts, Harry. :)

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