A Memory Not Forgotten

It’s like talking to an infant
No response, not even an expression

They stare at you, but they can’t see you
It takes everything they know, but slow

They see what you say, it hangs in the air
Before it’s heard it disintegrates on a prayer

Locked in a body devoid of memory
Peering through eyes bright with night

A friend you know
A husband you knew, or a wife too

They are here now, yet they are not
Loved ones, they are loved

Always loved and never forgotten
Even when they’ve gone

Even then...


Jan 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 29, 2014 at 6:20 PM
Congratulations Mark, Awesome free verse poem...Linda
Khan Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 2:35 AM
Great win Mark!..congrats..and thanku for your words on my write!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 11:55 PM
Very wonderful verse Mark!congrats on ur big win!
Lawless Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 12:20 PM
Mark, congrats on the win. Troubling poem, well written, leaving the reader to follow the last line.....wherever.
Onclaud Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 12:52 AM
heart-wrenching with beautiful lines,, i like the unfinished last line, mark... congrats and huggs on your fantastic win!
Trichet Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 3:39 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Nette. I enjoy reading your poetry immensely. It means a lot to me. Hugs back.
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 9:23 PM
gosh, is this about alzheimers? that is how it appears to me. That is such a sad disease and this poem certainly would capture the feeling we get talking to those broken souls. Congrats on your win. A very fine job.
Trichet Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 1:39 AM
My mother's dear friend had Alzheimers and died as a result a few years ago. I guess I took it to heart and wrote it straight from there. Many thanks for your kind words and nice to meet you too!
Walker  Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 5:10 PM
Fine win Mark... Congrats! Verlena
Trichet Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 1:36 AM
Thankyou Verlena for taking the time to read it.
Puddifoot Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 5:07 PM
I liked this from the very first time I read it; you express the subject so well without overstating it...I've had a quick peek at a couple of your other poems and I really think you have a special talent - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
Trichet Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 1:34 AM
Thanks Charlotte for your very kind words and hosting the contest. much appreciated
Kendrick Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 4:25 PM
Way to go ....Congrats..Sara
Trichet Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 1:32 AM
Thanks Sara
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