A Meeting

Yellow eyes locking,
glares broadcasting dominance
Bodies crouch, tails flick,
as potential energy
changes to kinetic force
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 27, 2011 at 6:10 AM
Good mornin' Jenni-this is my 2nd read this morning related to a pet....it is such a fun topic to write about. You chose a great poetry form to describe the characteristics of animal dominance. The de-tails (pun) are just perfect! Much enjoyed. Will look for more of your mature writing style in the future. Gwendolen
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