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Yellow eyes locking, glares broadcasting dominance Bodies crouch, tails flick, as potential energy changes to kinetic force

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Date: 9/27/2011 6:10:00 AM
Good mornin' Jenni-this is my 2nd read this morning related to a pet....it is such a fun topic to write about. You chose a great poetry form to describe the characteristics of animal dominance. The de-tails (pun) are just perfect! Much enjoyed. Will look for more of your mature writing style in the future. Gwendolen
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