A May Day Delight

If we go into the woods today
along the path where bluebells sway,
'neath cool beechwood shade
to our secret ever glade;
Salad and cooked meats to eat,
champagne for this treat,
we'll read,paint or write
of this May day delight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 11:40 PM
May is an awesome time for a picnic. But right now in my state, may is not looking good. It's more like March! So much rain and chilly days as well. I hope in your country, you are having an actual May? A delightful poem.
Devonshire Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 10:14 AM
Very nice, Brian. Congratulations on your success in Carol's Picnic Contest! Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 6:13 PM
Brian, Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses
Onclaud Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 8:13 AM
dazzling piece, brian...A-1 cheers for the fine win! :) huggs
Taylor Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 7:57 AM
Congrats on your HM, Brian. Nice going. Ralph
Mehta Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 7:16 AM
My congratulations on this HM win in the contest of carol, brian
Sweetheart Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:24 AM
Congrats Brian on your HM in the picnic contest with this delightful write my friend.. a stellar menu and perfect in the month of May .my favorite month.. enjoy your special honor for excellence and creativity ..
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:04 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Brian. Love, Carol
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace