A Mature Beaver

A young lad masquerading as an old geezer Looking for a lady who owns a mature beaver One with mucho bucks Still able to cluck And willing to take pity on a geezer still eager
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 11:02 AM
Leave it to beaver... :o
Ellison Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 11:07 AM
WOW! Think they cleaned it up a bit though... whatcha tink??? xxx
Flats Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 9:12 AM
What some guys will do for a buck//One foolish fella named Chuck//blew his chance//for golden romance//when he said, "Babe, you need a nip and a tuck!" CLUCK ON SIR JACK!!!
Ellison Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 9:27 AM
!!!!! Love it...whatta duo, me and you-o!!! WE'RE BOTH A-CLUCKING!!!
Sivey Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 6:57 AM
That is frightening indeed, that poor lady is being scammed! She thinks its a nice old man that is being her friend and rocking her world, but alas it's just someone that wants her money...so true these days! How sad it is! I really enjoyed reading your grand piece this morning! You have written a masterful poem, Great Work my friend!!
Ellison Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 7:05 AM
Takes all kinds eh!!! HAVE A SUPER DAY SIR RUSSELL!!!
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 6:54 AM
lol Jack I've written about beavers in the past too lol:-)I've just posted a limerick I wrote the other day and not had chance to post until now... it may appeal lol:-) hugs jan xx
Ellison Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 6:58 AM
Will definitely mosey on over!!!
One Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 6:00 AM
Hahaha... I know a few so called lads like this and some ladies too...
Ellison Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 6:05 AM
You sound worldly like me!!! lol
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