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A Mature Beaver

A young lad masquerading as an old geezer Looking for a lady who owns a mature beaver One with mucho bucks Still able to cluck And willing to take pity on a geezer still eager

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/13/2017 11:02:00 AM

Leave it to beaver... :o

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/13/2017 11:07:00 AM

WOW! Think they cleaned it up a bit though... whatcha tink??? xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/13/2017 9:12:00 AM

What some guys will do for a buck//One foolish fella named Chuck//blew his chance//for golden romance//when he said, "Babe, you need a nip and a tuck!" CLUCK ON SIR JACK!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/13/2017 9:27:00 AM

!!!!! Love it...whatta duo, me and you-o!!! WE'RE BOTH A-CLUCKING!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/13/2017 6:57:00 AM

That is frightening indeed, that poor lady is being scammed! She thinks its a nice old man that is being her friend and rocking her world, but alas it's just someone that wants her money...so true these days! How sad it is! I really enjoyed reading your grand piece this morning! You have written a masterful poem, Great Work my friend!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/13/2017 7:05:00 AM

Takes all kinds eh!!! HAVE A SUPER DAY SIR RUSSELL!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2017 6:54:00 AM

lol Jack I've written about beavers in the past too lol:-)I've just posted a limerick I wrote the other day and not had chance to post until now... it may appeal lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/13/2017 6:58:00 AM

Will definitely mosey on over!!!

Silent One

Date: 10/13/2017 6:00:00 AM

Hahaha... I know a few so called lads like this and some ladies too...

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/13/2017 6:05:00 AM

You sound worldly like me!!! lol