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A Matter of When

Yes, life sure is beautiful;
            meant to be lived
     and enjoyed to the fullest,
         but make no mistake, 
    one thing it's not is a friend.

            Life gives no one
      the red carpet treatment.
          It doesn't make one
 a cushy bed of roses to sleep on.
  It tests one's faith and resolve.

      Life could, if it wanted to,
     knock you flat on the floor 
   with a vicious, powerful hook.
       When it does, try rising 
           to your feet, alone.

     Life will shove you through
  a meat grinder. You must fight 
 to emerge at the tail-end intact.
      And it will challenge you; 
        it's a matter of when,

                  not if...
       so prepare yourself!
           The question is...
              are you up 
         for the challenge?


Date written: 07/09/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Goff Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 6:50 AM
Cool write Edward! Congrats!
Ibeh Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 12:42 PM
Thank you so much, James:-)
Alex Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 1:53 AM
"Life gives no one the carpet treatment" -Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 2:42 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2020 at 10:35 PM
Wow! This one delivers quite a punch. Not for the soft of heart. --- But from my experience, right on target. That's how life is. Thanks, Gershon
Ibeh Avatar
July 11, 2020 at 10:52 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon:-) Glad you liked it!
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