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                        October 13, 2025, entered in Craig Cornish's Forts and Castles contest, placed 13th

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A Matter of Perspective


The many forts I’ve helped to build
will not go down in history.
Instead of warriors, these were filled
with grandkids. Creativity
with household items was the key.

With five chairs draped in king-size sheets,
fat pillows, and a few small toys,
they played, took naps, and munched their treats—
proof positive some girls and boys
are happy with life’s simple joys.

I’m fascinated by the sight
of castles in an ancient land,
but I must say I most delight
in those kids build with warm, wet sand
or little toy bricks, Lego brand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 10/14/2025 1:19:00 PM
this is very touching, janice! i can relate to it 100%. i miss those pre-screen days when my grandkids (and kids!) used to play like that...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/14/2025 9:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ilene. Janice
Date: 10/14/2025 12:17:00 PM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It...  "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day writing away...............
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/14/2025 9:06:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paula. I'll read yours now. Janice
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