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A matter of perspective

Back in school, it seemed time was at a standstill. In hindsight, it seemed
like a hell we needed to to go through and survive as best we could so as to earn our freedom.
 
Back then, I wish someone had showed me a jar of marbles ~ one marble
for every year of my life. Let's say even just 60, and pick out 4 or 5
that represent those highschool years ~ look at all the marbles left :
THAT's your life, the few in your hand are just some kind of twisted test…


courage and patience
bridging to the other side
freedom lies ahead



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on May 18, 2025 to contest 'YOUR CHOICE i' sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 10TH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 10:57 AM
Wow. What a super cool perspective. Big congrats, dear
Gauthier Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 1:29 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea. Most appreciated ~
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