A Matchbox In the Rain

Unprotected piece of a house
exposed to fierce drops of water
prone to melt away in mud
like a music box in a matchbox,
unbelievable and unnecessary
and yet there,
a dwelling of husband and wife
to nest and breed
their young
willing to go away
and build their own music matchboxes,
stronger and safer
yet still
exposed to the ruthless transparency
of falling water.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/21/2013 11:45:00 AM
Compelling read!
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Date: 8/20/2012 1:44:00 AM
Wow! Very evocative
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Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 8/20/2012 4:29:00 AM
Kind as always, Bill. Thanks.
Date: 8/10/2012 12:18:00 PM
nice write AA
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Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 8/20/2012 4:29:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. I liked your poems verymuch, too.
Date: 8/7/2012 5:09:00 AM
Like it - very well written poem. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 8/10/2012 11:26:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Have a lovely day as well Archontoula
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