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A Match In the Dark

All is black; and you cry as darkness overwhelms you, cringing all alone in the dark; helpless, confused, and frightened. Do not weep, I'm a friend, let me strike a match and set your doubts and fears free; as we share its light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Poteet Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 1:37 PM
Love the form, Emile and the appeal you wrote using it. Congratulations on a super brevity piece with a clear concise, simple message.
Pinet Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 3:20 PM
Thanks so much, Reason, you've brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Alex Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 12:44 AM
Great writing. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 7:45 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Radice Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 12:21 PM
I can envisage this being slowly recited on a stage or in church. It appears simplistic yet is deep and profound. Congratulations on your win. Cheers - Gary
Pinet Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 2:11 PM
Thank you so much, Gary, you have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
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March 20, 2022 at 9:38 AM
Congratulations for your placement and thanks for the entry :)
Pinet Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 11:00 AM
Thanks, Anoucheka, your encouragement is most welcomed, my friend, Emile.
Watt Avatar
March 3, 2020 at 11:50 PM
Emile, this is a stellar tribute to the power of friendship to overcome the darkness of fear, confusion, and helplessness. It is a blessed person indeed who receives this kind offer from a friend. A very fitting poem to name your book after, my friend ~ John
Pinet Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 7:34 AM
Thanks so much John, you have brought a smile to my day my friend, and I appreciate it, Emile.
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December 2, 2018 at 10:55 AM
Hello Emile,I like this poem. This lovely verse you created. It warms me up when i read it. have a nice day my friend.
Pinet Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 11:08 AM
Thanks Darlene, your encouraging comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Williams Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 9:53 PM
How wonderful your prose. Congrats as a newcomer.
Pinet Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 8:27 AM
Thanks Marilyn, your encouragement is most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 10:42 PM
This is lovely Emile! You are always so kind as to create a poem in someone's invented form. I know they appreciate it as much as I do. Kudos on this one! : )
Pinet Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Thank you so much Connie, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Marc Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 9:58 PM
Graceful
Pinet Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Thanks P.M., as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Awtry Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 7:47 AM
Beautiful!
Pinet Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Thanks P.S., I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Duet Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 7:54 PM
This one evokes childhood memories and fears that are so relatable for so many of us "sissies". lol Congrats on your win in the contest too, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Thanks Carole, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Raven Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Hi Emile, droppinf by with my congratulations on your well deserved win with this excellent poem. have a wonderful Tuesday....Mike.
Pinet Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 4:48 PM
Thanks Vladislav, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 7:33 PM
Oooh! Is this ever wonderful. This poem is a true 'lamplighter.' So artistically crafted and shaped, Emile. Bravo. A FAVE for me! Best wishes, Gershon
Pinet Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 7:39 PM
Thanks Gershon, I appreciate your kind comments my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 7:14 PM
Back with congrats, Emile. Well done.
Pinet Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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November 2, 2018 at 2:51 PM
This poem feels like a hug to the reader, Emile. It truly does.
Pinet Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 3:10 PM
Thank you Caren, you have a poet's soul my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 12:28 PM
Sweet, Emile... and the shape of your poem is appropriately evocative of a candle.
Pinet Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 3:08 PM
Thank you Line, your support is mana to my ego my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 9:55 AM
Very nice Emile :)
Pinet Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Thanks so much Heidi, I always enjoy hearing from you my friend, Emile.
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