A Masterpiece


 A young poet blossomed to a beautiful flower
 She created stunning views
untouched by others
     Beautifully written
 Astounding many readers
     Impressive views
 Fascination for colors
 A master of her own crafted style
 Bestowed the highest of honor
 in creating her own masterpiece



taken from comments and turned it to poetry
9/9/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 11:51 AM
Creative way to go..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
Carrillo Avatar
January 17, 2013 at 4:41 PM
This is very beautiful. a young poet was born. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Sweetheart Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 10:09 PM
wonderfully clever Phyl .. astonishing how u could create such beauty from comments luv .. sorry for late reply to sm but my youngest son and his wife home from military till holidays over .. r expecting baby 9/22 so we r all so excited now .. so great to have the glowing lovebirds home for a while.. how r u luv?
Loving Iii Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 4:07 PM
Your wearing your pride on your sleeve.
Babcock Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 4:15 PM
I have come a long way since I first started writing and I am honored the above comments were made to me from fellow poets
Anish Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 1:37 PM
Are you the poetess in the poem? Interesting take on writing. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Babcock Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 4:03 PM
this was taken from comments made to me. I thought it was a unique idea
Horsman Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 3:57 PM
what a very clever and enthraling idea, Phyllis. this is sheer magic:
Babcock Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 4:03 PM
thanks Harry
Onclaud Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 12:37 PM
enthralling me no end, phyllis... a great creative angle!..:) huggs!
Babcock Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 4:04 PM
thanks nette
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 6:56 AM
what an imaginative way to write a new poem, Phyllis. WOW!!!
Babcock Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 4:04 PM
thanks for the comments will be home on the weekend
Guzzi Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 6:26 PM
Keep going Phyll...Light & love
Babcock Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 4:05 PM
thanks Deb
Andresen Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 2:07 PM
Yes, it's true Phyllis - many examples of that here. Very well written. Have a lovely Sunday afternoon. / / Hug Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 4:06 PM
thanks Anne Lise it is a warm Tue here in Saskatoon but around home they are forecasting our first frost. Good that I cleared my garden off on the weekend;
Falotico Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 12:47 PM
Such beauty throughout!! Lovely.
Babcock Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 4:06 PM
thanks Michael
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