A Martian's Fantasy

The fantasy of a Martian like me
  is to explore Earth's vast blue seas
to fraternize with dolphins and whales
  to return to Mars with many a tale

of octopus, squid, stingrays and eels
  the intense water pressure one feels
perhaps experience rapture of the deep ~ 
  long as my fifteen heads get their beauty sleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 7:37 AM
Love the fantasticalness of this one!
Wolf Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 6:02 PM
Love imaginativenession of your comment
George Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 7:38 AM
Never knew you are a Martian ! So far I have seen you as an Earthling! Are you so tired of staying here? Don't go back to Mars ! We will miss you .... :) :)
Wolf Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 5:36 PM
Ah, I make four pit-stops on Earth every year. Never Fear! :) gw
Gentile Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 5:25 AM
Alas, I am am an Earthling and yet to experience the depths of your imagery here, Gotta change that!! Happy Tuesday Gershon!!
Wolf Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 5:35 PM
Alas and alack, Earthling Mike... Not to worry. You'll have your day -- It's called 'Earth Day!' ~ Mars Bar
Shaw Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 4:39 AM
Thank heavens, Gershon, we have so many TV channels, it helps to keep "em all entertained, lovely witty tale . . . ; )
Wolf Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 7:27 AM
Ha, ha! This Martian can always turn on 'My Favorite Martian,' unless he's too jealous... :) gw
Proxenos Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 11:15 AM
This is clever, your poetry always carries significant messages and I feel both your desperation and hopelessness, but we have to stay sane and laugh a little sometimes, this poem is all about, coping and living and that tomorrow is another day, enjoyed this poem and had a giggle. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 7:26 AM
Glad you giggled, Jennifer! Wolf with a Wiggle
Hankins Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 8:43 AM
(chuckling) Gosh, I don't think I could cope with a being of fifteen heads, gw. I have enough trouble keeping my one head straight!
Boles Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:00 AM
Hahaha, you floored me with the last line! So impressed with your unconventional wit, Gershon. Hubba Hubba!...ab
Wolf Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 7:24 AM
15 heads did the trick for you, I see, Anselmo. Glad I didn't give that Martian 16 heads. lol. Thanks, gw
Ball Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:23 PM
This is too cute Gershon. Reminds me of the little Martian and his dog that visited Earth in the Looney Toons I used to watch as a kid. Bugs Bunny used to give him quite the run around. A real fun read. God Bless, JB
Wolf Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:37 PM
Let's keep having fun, Judy. Good times straight ahead...
Krutsinger Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:02 PM
I like the quick happy feeling I get with this one.
Wolf Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:37 PM
Good. Hope the happy feeling does not go away quickly, Caren. Thanks, gw
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