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A Martian's Fantasy

The fantasy of a Martian like me is to explore Earth's vast blue seas to fraternize with dolphins and whales to return to Mars with many a tale of octopus, squid, stingrays and eels the intense water pressure one feels perhaps experience rapture of the deep ~ long as my fifteen heads get their beauty sleep

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Date: 4/4/2022 7:37:00 AM
Love the fantasticalness of this one!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/4/2022 6:02:00 PM
Love imaginativenession of your comment
Date: 3/30/2022 7:38:00 AM
Never knew you are a Martian ! So far I have seen you as an Earthling! Are you so tired of staying here? Don't go back to Mars ! We will miss you .... :) :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/30/2022 5:36:00 PM
Ah, I make four pit-stops on Earth every year. Never Fear! :) gw
Date: 3/29/2022 5:25:00 AM
Alas, I am am an Earthling and yet to experience the depths of your imagery here, Gotta change that!! Happy Tuesday Gershon!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/30/2022 5:35:00 PM
Alas and alack, Earthling Mike... Not to worry. You'll have your day -- It's called 'Earth Day!' ~ Mars Bar
Date: 3/29/2022 4:39:00 AM
Thank heavens, Gershon, we have so many TV channels, it helps to keep "em all entertained, lovely witty tale . . . ; )
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/30/2022 7:27:00 AM
Ha, ha! This Martian can always turn on 'My Favorite Martian,' unless he's too jealous... :) gw
Date: 3/28/2022 11:15:00 AM
This is clever, your poetry always carries significant messages and I feel both your desperation and hopelessness, but we have to stay sane and laugh a little sometimes, this poem is all about, coping and living and that tomorrow is another day, enjoyed this poem and had a giggle. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/30/2022 7:26:00 AM
Glad you giggled, Jennifer! Wolf with a Wiggle
Date: 3/28/2022 8:43:00 AM
(chuckling) Gosh, I don't think I could cope with a being of fifteen heads, gw. I have enough trouble keeping my one head straight!
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Date: 3/28/2022 1:00:00 AM
Hahaha, you floored me with the last line! So impressed with your unconventional wit, Gershon. Hubba Hubba!...ab
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/30/2022 7:24:00 AM
15 heads did the trick for you, I see, Anselmo. Glad I didn't give that Martian 16 heads. lol. Thanks, gw
Date: 3/27/2022 8:23:00 PM
This is too cute Gershon. Reminds me of the little Martian and his dog that visited Earth in the Looney Toons I used to watch as a kid. Bugs Bunny used to give him quite the run around. A real fun read. God Bless, JB
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/27/2022 8:37:00 PM
Let's keep having fun, Judy. Good times straight ahead...
Date: 3/27/2022 8:02:00 PM
I like the quick happy feeling I get with this one.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/27/2022 8:37:00 PM
Good. Hope the happy feeling does not go away quickly, Caren. Thanks, gw

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