A Mans Pride

Men strive to be the 
Best providers for their families
But it's a tough job when
There's many mouths to feed
Men are good role models
And excellent father figures
You younger ones will Know
What I mean when you get bigger
Yhey all carry their pride so high
But you can see the pain in their eyes
Working so hard only to
Get laid off with less pay
Struggling to keep their families
Together day by day
Men try to stay strong
But no matter how hard they try
You can still see the pain and the
Worry in their eyes
They give out so much
They'll do anything for love
They will give their hearts and souls
Even try to give you the heavens above
They will never show it
Forever they will hide
You can take a lot from a man
But you can never take away his pride



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/15/2010 5:09:00 PM
I think you did a good job with this challenge, Faleshia. Even not winning a contest, I often find I have ended up with a peom that I am proud of. Keep up your writng! LUv Andrea
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Date: 4/29/2010 1:59:00 PM
Great write not my experience of men but I am sure there are plenty of men out there like that, my dad was one of them...good luck in the contest sure you'll go far...Allie
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Date: 4/26/2010 10:00:00 PM
Awsum.. Carry on.. Bst of luk
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Date: 4/25/2010 9:14:00 AM
VERY GOOD WRITE... so true..god luck in contest
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Date: 4/24/2010 3:56:00 PM
Damn good entry, Faleshia. And so true.
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Date: 4/24/2010 3:55:00 PM
Great write that describes many men in our world..Keep the creative pen flowing...Good luck in the contest..Sara
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