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A Man's Metal

fatherless husband loins aching for progeny empty wombs await seeding childless mothers cry opening soft pocket sighs stoking the steel thorns rising Contest: Sedoka Me Any Subject Poet: Debbie Guzzi

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Gautami Phookan

Date: 3/1/2012 7:05:00 AM

Wow, everytime I read your work, I'm left totally spellbound!!! Congrats Debbie on your fine win in this contest..love, gautami

Christopher Bunton

Date: 2/29/2012 4:57:00 PM

Congratulations!

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/29/2012 3:36:00 PM

An excellent write, Debbie. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/29/2012 6:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Sedoka Me Any Subject" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/29/2012 5:27:00 AM

Debbie, congratulations on your win in Russell's contest :) Wilma

Kash Poet

Date: 2/29/2012 1:31:00 AM

Congrats Debi on your win.A strong write.Enjoyed the read.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/28/2012 10:12:00 PM

a searing piece that deserves this special award, debbie... i like empty wombs await seedling!.. super congrats! :) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2012 6:54:00 PM

super congrats Debbie on a dynamic win for this wonderful write in Sedoka contest luv..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/28/2012 6:26:00 PM

Even without the photo this poem is so profound! It makes me feel like finding him and giving him a huge bear hug! Congrats on this winning write, Deb. Your vocabulary and poetic maturity are great to read! Love, Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2012 5:12:00 PM

congrats on your win....Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/26/2012 3:55:00 PM

This is an excellent entry into my contest Debbie. I really enjoyed this write today! I read this poem several times so I can get the full effect of it! I think it a truly magnificent poem! I will be adjusting my poem later tonight so look for an adjustment later! Thanks! Great Work!!