A Man Who Dead At the Age of 33

A man who dead at age of 33
But he done the whole life 
in one shot by his way
By his own by the way
They told him make this
 make that
make this choice
not for that; is not good
By the way, at bay any way
But he held in his hands
All his own and he done
by his own by his way
Asking him; why u go 
all the way, all this way
They insisted don't do
that; but do this 
in this way, go that way
But he did what he done
all the way by his own
all his deeds in his own
by his way

May he dead young at age
of 33
and they cried for his life
short and spilled
but he never, never he cry
for his own; for his life
but he cried for their life
cause they never 
never they
 live for their own
for their life

he never chagrin of his choices
or never charm, 
he never chained
by their choices
He never ask for goodbye
or good luck! 
cause he done what he done
by his own by his way/..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dorr Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 12:53 PM
An Existentialist poem? Our individual freedom (that some doubt is possible scientifically) I think and feel can really exist. It should be the basis of our lives provided it is lived positively for our families and society, irrespective of who we are and where we live on this fascinating Earth, as now in England a beautiful twilight upon us although it is quite windy and drizzle has started this lovely Spring evening. Fine sentiments Sallam.
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April 15, 2013 at 11:49 AM
It is a good one
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April 12, 2013 at 9:52 PM
Sallam , this is deep. Enjoyed stopping by this evening. Thank you for sharing, ~Always & Forever *LINDA
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