A Lusty Bar-Maiden

There once was a lusty bar-maiden
Born in the Republic of Aden --
   You'd order your drink
   She'd give you a wink --
She hoped for a kiss on the trade-in
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Proxenos Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 2:06 AM
Simple, cute and creative - well penned Gershon, Hugs, Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 10:47 PM
Appreciate your generous evaluation, Jennifer. Thank you so much. Best wishes, Gershon
Onclaud Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 3:10 PM
ohh, lovely teaser, gershon... i see you did lims one after another.. i had to post 2 pieces as well due to soup's intermission... had fun with this!...huggs
Wolf Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 4:46 PM
I was actually just rattling these limericks off today. A rare burst of creativity, I guess. Thanks for the nice review on the bar-maid, nette. Appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 1:38 PM
Haha my kind of bar maiden
Wolf Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 1:41 PM
Get to the bar early, before she runs out of kisses... :) gw
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