A Loving Aversion

How do you compare to others
are you grateful for what you tend
is your life not what you imagined
is anger a childhood friend

Why tap the keys with bitterness
does illusion light your stage
what’s reflected in your mirror
how authentic is this play

Is perfection worth the measure
vulnerability for just the tame
are your sleepless nights no burden
do your blankets shroud the pain

Is defense the chosen weapon
is your quiver filled with woes
will you shoot those fiery arrows
till your tide ebbs to a close

Do you see what’s in the running
will tomorrow ever come
can you ascend to some contentment
or will energy succumb

Those doors slammed  tight before you
could you bust them with embrace
alas, its life’s misjudgment
to forever lose the taste
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 10:45 PM
Interesting write, I feel very fortunate with my life. Only a couple of things I would change. Good choices makes a difference. Hugs
Norwood Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 11:42 AM
thanks Eve. This is about perspective and focusing on those things that are truly important.
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