A Lover's Tale

her beauty reminds me of a splendid lake
so soft and sweet that cannot fake
her lips so sweet like berry cake
i knew just then i don have to bake
her hips and curves were a perfect make
so perfect all kings would want to take
i'll beat all odds for her gentle sake
my love for her can never quake
if this is a dream i dont want to wake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Wesley Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 7:37 PM
Oh, such a story, makes my heart ache for a man called Jake! I'm being silly; I think you made great use of you rhyme sceme and the story too. Loved it!
Benson Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 4:38 AM
Hi, Muhammad, your poem A Lover's Tale just made a pleasant read! I enjoyed it immensely. I must say keep up with your end rhymes, and the rhythm too.
O'Driscoll Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 3:20 AM
wonderfull rhyme Muhammad, love Elizabeth
Momoh Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 3:29 AM
i want to say a big thank YOU cos now i feel brand NEW i beg to take an abrupt FLEE with lots of love from ME..... THANK U
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