A Lovers Spat

Upstairs; a bed with sleeping teddy bears
Downstairs; a table and two chairs
His sighs
His lonely eyes
The dim silent room
The snow falling through the gloom
The reflection in the window
Stare back upon
     The one who in anger bid her go
Lamenting the hours she's been gone
And the shouting that seemed so long ago
Even pride can no longer recall
what winds brought the storm
nor how deep the rainfall
Not even knowing if she’s safe and warm
Then the creaking door
The room awash in sudden cold
He waits no more
For the darkness to unfold
Her, in his rush to hold her
Their eyes meeting as he enfold
Her, and his unashamed tear
Ponders his disgrace
As he wipes the same tear from her face
Midst the rapture of love's embrace
In passion's haste things were said
For anger's sake
     -now anger is dead
In both their hearts
Where love left smouldering erupt in flame
And cupids darts
Linger without blame
In their quiver
his cheeks dewy
His bottom lip aquiver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 10/29/2025 6:16:00 PM
You’ve described a spat very well. Those first two lines intriguing, pull us in!
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Nine Dragons
Date: 10/30/2025 5:41:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. I hope I have pages and pages to share and reflect on one day too, as you do. many good reads.
Date: 10/29/2025 4:25:00 PM
Beautiful poem of reconciliation and healing. Yeah, our words can be like poison arrows at times. Self control is vital
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Nine Dragons
Date: 10/30/2025 5:42:00 PM
And we have all been there in one shape or another. Sorry cupid, we worked it out ourselves.
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