T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet Poet Dodoitsu

A Lovers Night

Sweet hot breath
                                     two strong loving arms.
                                 Night of love between lovers.
                                             My deep love.
                                               Teresa Skyles

Entered in Micheal Falotico's"SPICY"women's contest.

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Carol Sunshine Brown January 21, 2011 at 4:45 AM I am stopping by this morning to read your amazing poetry, and to thank you for your kind comments on mine Teresa. The best to you in Michael's contest. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire January 8, 2011 at 1:30 PM Passion always burns through "sweet hot breath," Teresa. A great entry for Michael's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2011 at 4:43 PM I think you did just fine, Teresa. Sorry I can't stay longer to see more poems of yours. I'm running late and stayed here too long! Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2011 at 4:57 PM oh, good thing i noticed your first line before I commented. I thought you did not have enough lines. Sweet hot breath is one of your best lines and it got stuck out to the left side of your poem somehow. That first line really spiced it up! Luv, Andrea