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A Lover's Death

Drink a brief death she did As it drained her youthful soul Disproving nature’s course and rid Her breath, she was no more Lying eyes upon the face Of her doom ridden love She chose her fate and gave chase Beyond her silken glove In desperate love and desperate times Her tears caused a stir Her father called for wedding chimes And worsened the state of her At last came her dire fate as we did foresee She took a vial from her monk and said Romeo, Romeo, Romeo I drink to thee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 6/22/2016 11:03:00 PM
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Date: 4/6/2015 7:16:00 AM
Hi Paige.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Welcome to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give any of the varied contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes this month! Please take time to check me out, ok... PS.. If you have any questions about the Soup feel free to ask, just send me a Soup Mail. Talk soon!
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Date: 4/4/2015 8:47:00 PM
PAIGE, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/31/2015 7:05:00 PM
Paige, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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