Jenna Logan Poet Rhyme

A Lover's Dance

A rhythmic waltz is a lover's dance.
   Matching steps, eyes in askance.
The answer, discretely given
   for a heart's desire is driven.
Love cannot be repressed
   It will always acquiesce.



June 27, 2022
Bite Size Poem No 48 Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Line Gauthier November 10, 2022 at 2:47 PM Charming, Jenna ~

Paula Goldsmith July 11, 2022 at 7:16 AM Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write. Love it. Have a great/blessed day writing away.....................

Christuraj Alex July 10, 2022 at 10:54 PM A beautiful work. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler July 1, 2022 at 10:58 AM triple time rhythm...I feel the pace - perfect dance of love. Linda Jenna Logan July 1, 2022 at 11:00 AM Thank you for the generous comments, Linda.

Regina Mcintosh June 30, 2022 at 11:36 AM Lovely write.. hope it wins. God bless you - Love, Gina Jenna Logan July 1, 2022 at 2:28 AM Thanks for your kind words, Gina.

Terry Flood June 27, 2022 at 5:25 PM Unfortunately, Jenna… I’d trample all over her toes. I’ve definitely got three left feet. But on behalf of those among us that have both the rhythm and the amore, good luck in the contest. Terry Jenna Logan June 29, 2022 at 7:21 AM Terry, remove your shoes. lol She'd rather have her toes stepped on than to sit alone as a wallflower. Thanks so much for commenting.

John Lawless June 27, 2022 at 12:51 PM Nicely done Jenna...a subtle bite sized nibble on the neck and .....viola!!! Jenna Logan June 29, 2022 at 7:20 AM I very much appreciate your kind thoughts, John.

David Kavanagh June 27, 2022 at 12:32 PM The power of love Jenna, and yes it will acquiesce, when the dance of seduction is over, and done properly, a little powerhouse you’ve put together here, all the best for contest, cheers David Jenna Logan June 29, 2022 at 7:20 AM Thanks so much for acknowledging it with your welcomed comments, David.