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A Lover's Dance

A rhythmic waltz is a lover's dance. Matching steps, eyes in askance. The answer, discretely given for a heart's desire is driven. Love cannot be repressed It will always acquiesce. June 27, 2022 Bite Size Poem No 48 Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2022 2:47:00 PM

Charming, Jenna ~

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/11/2022 7:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write. Love it. Have a great/blessed day writing away.....................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/10/2022 10:54:00 PM

A beautiful work. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/1/2022 10:58:00 AM

triple time rhythm...I feel the pace - perfect dance of love. Linda

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/1/2022 11:00:00 AM

Thank you for the generous comments, Linda.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/30/2022 11:36:00 AM

Lovely write.. hope it wins. God bless you - Love, Gina

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/1/2022 2:28:00 AM

Thanks for your kind words, Gina.

Terry Flood

Date: 6/27/2022 5:25:00 PM

Unfortunately, Jenna… I’d trample all over her toes. I’ve definitely got three left feet. But on behalf of those among us that have both the rhythm and the amore, good luck in the contest. Terry

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/29/2022 7:21:00 AM

Terry, remove your shoes. lol She'd rather have her toes stepped on than to sit alone as a wallflower. Thanks so much for commenting.

John Lawless

Date: 6/27/2022 12:51:00 PM

Nicely done Jenna...a subtle bite sized nibble on the neck and .....viola!!!

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/29/2022 7:20:00 AM

I very much appreciate your kind thoughts, John.

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/27/2022 12:32:00 PM

The power of love Jenna, and yes it will acquiesce, when the dance of seduction is over, and done properly, a little powerhouse you’ve put together here, all the best for contest, cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/29/2022 7:20:00 AM

Thanks so much for acknowledging it with your welcomed comments, David.