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A Lovely Waltz

a lovely white swan sang as she waltzed on the pond hi and very low rendering viewers speechless Is this her final sawn song

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/7/2021 11:24:00 AM

This tanka is a delight, Alexis. So beautiful! :) Evelyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/6/2021 8:00:00 AM

I like this one. I have never seen a swan in real life. I guess they are not around here or they are somewhat elusive. If this one was for a contest, it reads like a winner to me. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2021 5:44:00 PM

this is a charming tanka, my friend. Also wanted to thank you for your high praise of my morality poem. Thanks so much.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/4/2021 1:45:00 PM

this is beautiful

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/4/2021 11:58:00 AM

What an extraordinary performance, dearest Alexis! Fascinating writing! Hugs xxx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/3/2021 12:51:00 PM

Delightful. A lovely Tanka.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/3/2021 12:34:00 PM

As beautiful as a swan, Alexis--enjoyed the happy dance.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/3/2021 11:32:00 AM

Does "Diva" come from the end?