A Lovely Waltz

a lovely white swan
 sang as she waltzed on the pond
            hi and very low
  rendering viewers speechless
    Is this her final sawn song
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Buehler Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 11:24 AM
This tanka is a delight, Alexis. So beautiful! :) Evelyn
Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 8:00 AM
I like this one. I have never seen a swan in real life. I guess they are not around here or they are somewhat elusive. If this one was for a contest, it reads like a winner to me. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 5:44 PM
this is a charming tanka, my friend. Also wanted to thank you for your high praise of my morality poem. Thanks so much.
Horne Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 1:45 PM
this is beautiful
Trifiatis Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 11:58 AM
What an extraordinary performance, dearest Alexis! Fascinating writing! Hugs xxx
Buhagiar Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 12:51 PM
Delightful. A lovely Tanka.
Pandit Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 12:34 PM
As beautiful as a swan, Alexis--enjoyed the happy dance.
Leffanta Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 11:32 AM
Does "Diva" come from the end?
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