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A Lovely Vision

A lovely vision in a bonnet Her golden braids a-dangling down Her rosy cheek with dimple on it The fairest maiden I have found Her slender waist, my hand upon it Devoted to her beauty bound A lovely vision... If this tiara, she would don it The populace would raise a sound Proclaim her queen of verse and sonnets A lovely vision

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/3/2019 3:11:00 PM

A vision of beauty she surely seems - fit enough to be pronounced 'queen of verse and sonnets'. Hugs Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/3/2019 3:22:00 PM

Thank you so much for your endorsement of my queen here. Appreciated. Cheers, Gershon

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/3/2019 2:14:00 PM

This poem was a lovely vision my friend! Again you bring a smile to my lips!;) beautifully written!;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/3/2019 3:10:00 PM

Nah see you made me laugh now! Hahaha! ;)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/3/2019 2:47:00 PM

Keep this up, Brenda, and instead of the 'Lion King,' I'll have to go by the appellation of the 'Smilin' King!' (Hmm. Maybe I need a new comedy-writer. Ya think?! LOL). Warmest wishes, Gershon

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/2/2019 11:35:00 PM

Gershon, Well this is quite wonderful. Refilling souls is your calling. -Richard

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/3/2019 11:54:00 AM

It's a step from my former calling, resoling soles of shoes... LOL. Thanks, Richard! Cheers, Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/2/2019 9:55:00 PM

Sweet, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/3/2019 11:53:00 AM

Merci, Line!!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/2/2019 9:14:00 PM

How sweet... adorable poem that will be loved by anyone who reads it. Bless you, dear Gershon

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/3/2019 11:52:00 AM

Thank you so much, Regina, for your sweet words about this roundel. Blessings, Gershon