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A Lovely Midnight Blue

There is some dog doo on my shoe Gritty, grassy, smelly too. You call it feces. I call it pooh. It is a lovely midnight blue.

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Rahaba Mahomaile

Date: 10/31/2018 2:56:00 AM

Beautiful

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/31/2018 6:49:00 AM

Thank you. I thought it was fun.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/21/2018 10:13:00 PM

midnight blue on shoe as Gritty, grassy, smelly !/// nice

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2018 10:21:00 PM

I had forgotten all about this one. I thought what did I write? Oh, great!

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 9/15/2018 11:39:00 PM

Good one! ;D

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/16/2018 6:37:00 AM

It is a fav for me and I wrote it.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/15/2018 9:11:00 PM

You got me as I anticipated the last line would be "pee you!" Aloha! Rico

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/15/2018 10:42:00 PM

You were close.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2018 8:42:00 PM

oh did you do this for the rebel contest? ( i forgot the name of it, but this would be fantastic for it!!)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/15/2018 10:43:00 PM

I did not do it for anyone but myself, Andrea.