A Lovely Midnight Blue

There is some dog doo on my shoe
Gritty, grassy, smelly too.
You call it feces.
I call it pooh.
It is a lovely midnight blue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mahomaile Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 2:56 AM
Beautiful
Krutsinger Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Thank you. I thought it was fun.
Bangalee Avatar
October 21, 2018 at 10:13 PM
midnight blue on shoe as Gritty, grassy, smelly !/// nice
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2018 at 10:21 PM
I had forgotten all about this one. I thought what did I write? Oh, great!
Mcferran Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 11:39 PM
Good one! ;D
Krutsinger Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 6:37 AM
It is a fav for me and I wrote it.
Leffanta Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 9:11 PM
You got me as I anticipated the last line would be "pee you!" Aloha! Rico
Krutsinger Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 10:42 PM
You were close.
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 8:42 PM
oh did you do this for the rebel contest? ( i forgot the name of it, but this would be fantastic for it!!)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 10:43 PM
I did not do it for anyone but myself, Andrea.
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