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A Lovely Love

You made me smile. Our love was on fire. I could hardly breathe, with you staring at me. And when I stared into your eyes, I instantly knew you were mine, because you can’t fake a love, with the way your soft blue eyes looked back into mine. My heart is content with just you in the center. It makes me so glad that it’s December. If only I could fall asleep to the beat of your heart, I swear on my soul, That I’d never fall apart. For you were the one, That started my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/25/2018 8:58:00 AM
hi Autumn this is a very beautiful write , i don't know why are there only few comments, but the way you converts your thoughts into words is an absolutely the job of a great person.. i like this lines the most and it is my favourite "If only I could fall asleep to the beat of your heart, I swear on my soul, That I’d never fall apart. "
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Date: 12/6/2014 7:19:00 AM
what a beautiful tender write:-) hugs jan xx
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