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A Lovely Dream

I first met her on a holiday at Shuklaphanta Wildlife Reserve. Love strikes me like lightning when I saw her, so powerful and intense it can’t be denied. It turns me inside out, and there was no going back from it. Once the thunderbolt hits, my life irrevocably changed. With a carved stem-thin figure, And sparkly appearance. Her pencil-thin eyebrows, eased down gently to her velvety, Eyelashes. Her beauty is the celebrity's cute wind-swept twisting through the late evening's darkening heavens. Her smile shines stunningly like the sun rising over the skyline, her luminous, heavenly-white teeth flashed as she pawed at me with her flick star nails. Her gorgeousness is the stars that is now quivering into view as their star shine ends its life journey as a whim I am. Her enticing, constellation-blue eyes gazed at me over her syrup-sweet lips, She had a springy character and a syrupy voice, which I idolized. She is like a candle's flickering flame, radiating a soft warm light into me. Her hair was ebony-black and it tumbled over her shoulders. Her beauty shines from the inside out, It flows like a journey down a long route. Those sugar candy-sweet lips, her well-designed personality, all awestruck me. Her eyes sparkle like a bright star in the sky, seek out the good in me. Her body ornately furnished with typically girlish curves, Her voguish garments still kept enslaved an odor evocative of lemony fresh and floral-fresh mint. It loitered in the apartment long after she had gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/9/2018 3:43:00 AM
A really beautifully written poem, I enjoyed every single line of this poem, all of your poems are really beautiful, I ll be looking for your new poems as well, good luck and yeah thanks for reading my poems,
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Date: 8/8/2016 10:25:00 AM
Strong Namibian Poet.
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Yuhi Musinga
Date: 1/11/2017 12:20:00 AM
Thanks Paavo. Nawa tuu

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