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A Lovely Day

Early sunrise, within the forest A daily walk with mine eyes of rest. Beneath rugged oak and pine tree's shade, And the voice of nature's mirth play unafraid. The spirit I inhale it occupies in space As a cool breeze blows my hair across my face. A dusty dirt road laced in crunchy wheat, Red, yellow, and brown leaves my feet greet. Shyly on soft earth shadow path quiver And hastening heartbeat of cool blue river. There, where nesting birds await safely, In tall green and wither sedge blades safety. Giving my heart to the verdant neighbor. Taking pleasure, in earth's nurturing labor. 2/22/2022 A Lovely Day Poetry Contest Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley

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Date: 3/4/2022 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful/wonderful write. Love it. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 3/2/2022 2:02:00 PM
Congratulations Eve on the high placing win of your beautiful poem! <3 Thank you for entering the contest, have a blessed day! :)
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Date: 2/24/2022 8:57:00 PM
a lovely day, indeed, Eve. An apt entry.
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/24/2022 10:03:00 PM
thank you, Blessing my dear
Date: 2/24/2022 4:26:00 PM
Eve, 'twas entertaining as lines gave clarity to readers and poetry to poetess and poets alike, best to you my friend, Aloha~William!
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/24/2022 10:05:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Blessings to you and all your family
Date: 2/24/2022 2:34:00 PM
Met the criteria well, Eve. A lovely poem of a lovely day. :-) May your Spring days be so wonderful, Bill
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/24/2022 10:06:00 PM
thank you, Blessing to you , Bill
Date: 2/24/2022 1:37:00 AM
Great description of a lovely day.
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Date: 2/23/2022 8:56:00 AM
Enchanting rhyme; your imagery creates a perfect scene~Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/23/2022 9:46:00 PM
Thank you, Paulette. Blessings
Date: 2/23/2022 7:51:00 AM
A Great poem Eve….love the sweet simple title. Debx
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/23/2022 9:46:00 PM
Thank you, Deb. Blessings
Date: 2/23/2022 5:32:00 AM
Excellent rhyme on beauty, Eve:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/23/2022 9:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jo. Blessings

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