A Lovely Day

Early sunrise, within the forest A daily walk with mine eyes of rest. Beneath rugged oak and pine tree's shade, And the voice of nature's mirth play unafraid. The spirit I inhale it occupies in space As a cool breeze blows my hair across my face. A dusty dirt road laced in crunchy wheat, Red, yellow, and brown leaves my feet greet. Shyly on soft earth shadow path quiver And hastening heartbeat of cool blue river. There, where nesting birds await safely, In tall green and wither sedge blades safety. Giving my heart to the verdant neighbor. Taking pleasure, in earth's nurturing labor. 2/22/2022 A Lovely Day Poetry Contest Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley
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Goldsmith Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful/wonderful write. Love it. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 8:57 PM
a lovely day, indeed, Eve. An apt entry.
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 10:03 PM
thank you, Blessing my dear
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 4:26 PM
Eve, 'twas entertaining as lines gave clarity to readers and poetry to poetess and poets alike, best to you my friend, Aloha~William!
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 10:05 PM
Thank you my friend. Blessings to you and all your family
Baker Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 2:34 PM
Met the criteria well, Eve. A lovely poem of a lovely day. :-) May your Spring days be so wonderful, Bill
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 10:06 PM
thank you, Blessing to you , Bill
Buhagiar Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 1:37 AM
Great description of a lovely day.
Calasibetta Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 8:56 AM
Enchanting rhyme; your imagery creates a perfect scene~Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette
Roper Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 9:46 PM
Thank you, Paulette. Blessings
M  Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 7:51 AM
A Great poem Eve….love the sweet simple title. Debx
Roper Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 9:46 PM
Thank you, Deb. Blessings
Daniel Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 5:32 AM
Excellent rhyme on beauty, Eve:)
Roper Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 9:45 PM
Thank you so much, Jo. Blessings
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