A Lovelier and Calmer Planet

I floated into the windless sky of the tranquil night visited by minuscule stars
that were subdued by dim moonbeams calling for some gleeful dreaming;
and I wistfully dreamed of a lovelier and calmer planet remembering
two kind and sincere eyes much lovelier than bluebells swaying in clay pots.


I kept thinking of other universes never discovered by me and they surely existed
beyond ours which couldn't thrill me anymore with its mysteries;
dazzlingly beautiful they were as they expanded further into interstellar infinity... 
showing a grandiose light surpassing the one seen by the shepherds.


Many hours went by, and soon what I had envisioned started to vanish before dawn,
and floating back to earth I beheld that awesome vision of the Heavens.
I landed in corn fields tangled by tarn that made me cringe, tasting unripe corn;  
and cherishing what I saw, I recalled that sojourn which lasted for long hours!


I told everyone what I had seen in that dream so realistic, but they jeered at me,
believing I was hallucinating; I even had to endure some tongue-lashing from mother
as she noticed my pants togged in my boots: " You look like a soldier!" she screamed. .
I'm hoping to return to that lovelier and calmer planet, where everything is peaceful.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/7/2012 7:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrew! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/7/2012 1:44:00 PM
congrats Andrew on a remarkable win for this tremendous creative work penned my friend.. most enjoyable ..luv..
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations to you on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Your Own Favorite Poem" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2012 10:27:00 AM
Congrats, Andy. Outstanding piece. Enjoyed. Kudos. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/7/2012 8:53:00 AM
Wow. How good was that Andrew. Congratulations
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Date: 12/9/2010 12:48:00 PM
oh andrew, kindness is the balm of the heart! your words spill out a profusion of lavish moods. kudos! ...nette
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Date: 12/9/2010 5:51:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today Andrew. I enjoyed reading it and I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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