A Loveable Liquid

The throat ran with little rivulets
Having travelled through dry sections
Head held high on mountains

Ahead was a rumbling stream
Showcasing a marvelous wisdom
Throats refreshed with the gift of a lifetime

Sitting by the lakeside in the cool evening
Imagine the beauty of the sunsetting
Its reflection on the mirrorlike water, breathtaking!

Listen to the mighty roar of powerful ocean waves
As it pounds against rocky shores
And up in the sky, dripping tears

What about the tumbling down of a waterfall?
Down over the rocks to establish a call
A curtain of white water on the wall

Sweet sensational taste of heaven
Providing fishes their haven
Loveable liquid, nature's guardian

Mermaids in tropical seas
Holding beautiful roses
Enjoying different lovely poses

Under its generous appearance
Flowers bloom in abundance
As green leaves joyfully dance

Give me some water 
And I'll be smarter

A loveable liquid
A friend of all in its need
A best friend of all indeed!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/1/2017 6:10:00 PM
Sweet sensational taste of heaven....Lovable liquid. Very engaging poem. Yes, you do love nature as well. Thank you for your mail. I'm glad I could read this lovely piece. Blessings in the New Year.
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 1/1/2017 6:31:00 PM
Thank you for taking your time to read the poem, Eileen. Much love and joy to you.
Date: 12/27/2016 4:54:00 PM
fabulously beautiful :) I love it!
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 12/28/2016 2:30:00 AM
Thank you for checking by Akinna.
Date: 12/27/2016 1:55:00 PM
No many can tease such feelings and emotions from careful consideration of precious liquid, but you have done it well. I enjoyed 'dripping tears' and 'taste of heaven. '
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 12/27/2016 3:10:00 PM
Thank you, Mark. I appreciate your constructive comment, you are such a wonderful poet. Much love and joy to you.
Date: 12/27/2016 12:26:00 PM
Marvelous poem, Adeniji. Some romantic cool as refreshing cold water. Besides, I want some of that loveable liquid, I wanna get smarter too. Lol! A wonderful Romanticism poem, my poetic friend. Love and joy to you.
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 12/27/2016 3:08:00 PM
O great Freddie, I am very glad to read your comment. You are endowed with a great sense of humour which I really do appreciate in writers. Don't worry, mermaids in the tropical sea are coming with reservoirs of the loveable liquid. Much love and Joy to you my good friend.
Date: 12/27/2016 12:26:00 PM
Oh, what a great idea, and you made it come true, Adeniji. The playfulness of the young waters and the patience of the old ones.
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 12/27/2016 3:02:00 PM
Thank you, Dough. I really appreciate this beautiful comment. I love your personified expression ' The playfulness of the young waters and the patience of the old ones'.
Date: 12/27/2016 11:54:00 AM
- I find this poem beautiful and romantic, great written Adeniji - // Sun :)
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 12/27/2016 2:58:00 PM
Thank you sunshine, I am thrilled with your comment. Joy to you.
Date: 12/27/2016 8:20:00 AM
Loving the imagery here... Mermaids holding roses..wow
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 12/27/2016 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Tim.
Date: 12/27/2016 4:40:00 AM
Very nice poem, inspiring
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 12/27/2016 7:00:00 AM
Thank you Dr. I really appreciate your comment.
Date: 12/27/2016 4:35:00 AM
There's nothing, NOTHING like water. An absolutely delightful and true poem, full of metaphors... 7 for you...
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 12/27/2016 6:59:00 AM
Water is an amazing friend of everyone. Thank you,Darren. I'm thrilled to read and accept your encomium.
Date: 12/26/2016 5:11:00 PM
WoW! Adeniji, What a poetic delight to read to today. Your imagery and metaphors created a such a lovely scene."A Lovable Liquid " is such a good title. It beckoned me to read this well written piece. Well done. A without a doubt seven: -) Alexis
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 12/26/2016 11:24:00 PM
Dear Alexis, thank you for taking time to read my poem. I am very delighted and appreciate the encomium. Much joy to you.
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