Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon Poet Romanticism

A Loveable Liquid

The throat ran with little rivulets
Having travelled through dry sections
Head held high on mountains

Ahead was a rumbling stream
Showcasing a marvelous wisdom
Throats refreshed with the gift of a lifetime

Sitting by the lakeside in the cool evening
Imagine the beauty of the sunsetting
Its reflection on the mirrorlike water, breathtaking!

Listen to the mighty roar of powerful ocean waves
As it pounds against rocky shores
And up in the sky, dripping tears

What about the tumbling down of a waterfall?
Down over the rocks to establish a call
A curtain of white water on the wall

Sweet sensational taste of heaven
Providing fishes their haven
Loveable liquid, nature's guardian

Mermaids in tropical seas
Holding beautiful roses
Enjoying different lovely poses

Under its generous appearance
Flowers bloom in abundance
As green leaves joyfully dance

Give me some water 
And I'll be smarter

A loveable liquid
A friend of all in its need
A best friend of all indeed!

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Eileen Manassian January 1, 2017 at 6:10 PM Sweet sensational taste of heaven....Lovable liquid. Very engaging poem. Yes, you do love nature as well. Thank you for your mail. I'm glad I could read this lovely piece. Blessings in the New Year. Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon January 1, 2017 at 6:31 PM Thank you for taking your time to read the poem, Eileen. Much love and joy to you.

Akkina Downing December 27, 2016 at 4:54 PM fabulously beautiful :) I love it! Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon December 28, 2016 at 2:30 AM Thank you for checking by Akinna.

Mark Peterson December 27, 2016 at 1:55 PM No many can tease such feelings and emotions from careful consideration of precious liquid, but you have done it well. I enjoyed 'dripping tears' and 'taste of heaven. ' Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon December 27, 2016 at 3:10 PM Thank you, Mark. I appreciate your constructive comment, you are such a wonderful poet. Much love and joy to you.

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 27, 2016 at 12:26 PM Marvelous poem, Adeniji. Some romantic cool as refreshing cold water. Besides, I want some of that loveable liquid, I wanna get smarter too. Lol! A wonderful Romanticism poem, my poetic friend. Love and joy to you. Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon December 27, 2016 at 3:08 PM O great Freddie, I am very glad to read your comment. You are endowed with a great sense of humour which I really do appreciate in writers. Don't worry, mermaids in the tropical sea are coming with reservoirs of the loveable liquid. Much love and Joy to you my good friend.

Doug Vinson December 27, 2016 at 12:26 PM Oh, what a great idea, and you made it come true, Adeniji. The playfulness of the young waters and the patience of the old ones. Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon December 27, 2016 at 3:02 PM Thank you, Dough. I really appreciate this beautiful comment. I love your personified expression ' The playfulness of the young waters and the patience of the old ones'.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 27, 2016 at 11:54 AM - I find this poem beautiful and romantic, great written Adeniji - // Sun :) Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon December 27, 2016 at 2:58 PM Thank you sunshine, I am thrilled with your comment. Joy to you.

Tim Smith December 27, 2016 at 8:20 AM Loving the imagery here... Mermaids holding roses..wow Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon December 27, 2016 at 11:39 AM Thank you Tim.

Dr.Mohammed Alrazak December 27, 2016 at 4:40 AM Very nice poem, inspiring Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon December 27, 2016 at 7:00 AM Thank you Dr. I really appreciate your comment.

Darren White December 27, 2016 at 4:35 AM There's nothing, NOTHING like water. An absolutely delightful and true poem, full of metaphors... 7 for you... Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon December 27, 2016 at 6:59 AM Water is an amazing friend of everyone. Thank you,Darren. I'm thrilled to read and accept your encomium.

Alexis Y. December 26, 2016 at 5:11 PM WoW! Adeniji, What a poetic delight to read to today. Your imagery and metaphors created a such a lovely scene."A Lovable Liquid " is such a good title. It beckoned me to read this well written piece. Well done. A without a doubt seven: -) Alexis Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon December 26, 2016 at 11:24 PM Dear Alexis, thank you for taking time to read my poem. I am very delighted and appreciate the encomium. Much joy to you.