A Love Worth Describing

My heart is as soft clay in your hands
My soul dances with the beat of your heart
I patiently wait each day  to hear your soft  voice
I yearn for the slightest touch of your fingers
Every night I lie awake thinking about your love
Dreams of you flashes through my mind 
as a shooting star flashes across the sky
I am captured by your love, and knitted together by hope
You are my early morning sun rise, and my happiness in my day
Time may age us, but time will not stand in our way.
My passion for you runs deep into the belly of my heart
No matter what comes in our way
I will serve you, crave you, and love you
It doesn't matter how far I'm away
To be honest you may forget many things I have said
but please remember that I'm yours for the rest of my days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 6/11/2012 5:09:00 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
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Date: 2/19/2012 12:31:00 PM
This is lovely. Keep up the excellent work! You'll find your sunshine in no time
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Date: 2/19/2012 12:31:00 PM
Congrats btw better rate now
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Date: 2/19/2012 12:19:00 PM
Taj,, Congratulations on your poem featured this week...have a Nice one...pd
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Date: 2/13/2012 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured by Poetry Soup this week...............S.Ronthorpe.
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Date: 2/13/2012 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Taj. Love, Carol
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