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A Love Stroll In the Countryside

Come my love, let's rest under the lilac trees,
Hear the vast countryside sing with dewy grass,
Birds fly high twittering their mating allure.
I look only on your face so smooth, so class.

It's now late afternoon and birds go to rest
Let's enjoy the soft breeze that meander through
Tall trees, swaying lightly in the evening and
There a cottage , walls covered with flowers blue.

There we'll have a high tea, a splendid cook's fare
Till the sun disappears and darkness covers
The terrain so green while a slice of red moon
Ascend slowly, lightens us as two lovers

We watch the bright landscape in magic moonlight.
I feel her face resting on my shoulders, tired.
We ascend for a good night's sleep in our room,
We kiss and know we have what love we required.
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Raven Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 2:50 PM
Hi Victor, before I go any further, a definite fave. I love this beautiful write. It did hold me in romantic raptures. I always love the way you merge nature with love. It always works in such a special way. Have a wonderful evening. Your friend always ..... Mike.
Skelly Avatar
June 27, 2022 at 5:20 AM
Lilacs symbolize spring and renewal, but they had other meanings in different cultures. The Celtics saw lilacs as magical, and they symbolized old love in the Victorian age. 4. Each colour of lilac has its own specific meaning. White lilacs represent purity and innocence, while purple lilacs symbolize spirituality. I was curious about the symbolism of Lilacs after reading your lovely poem...Delice
Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 4:44 AM
Ahh!! So romantic. There is beauty in the countryside and love as well. I am sure in the city also. I enjoyed reading your work. It was inspiring. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Edmonds  Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 8:14 PM
A lovely love story in late afternoon lasting until the appearance of the magical moon. Beautiful poetry Victor… Belle
Rose  Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Yes lets have an afternoon tea, I will bring the freshly made bread, always friend, never doubt I am there, :)
Seeker Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 2:05 AM
Victor the romantic resurfaces!
Roper Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 3:14 PM
Young love, blessings in every thing they see when one is in love.
Poet Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 11:48 AM
How incredibly lovely! Romance amidst the lilac bushes as well as the enchantment of the moonlight! It is a blessing to feel so enthusiastic upon reading such a remarkable poem as you have created.
Buehler Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 9:23 AM
A perfect day ends perfectly, under a romantic moon! I enjoyed reading this beautiful tale, Victor. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 8:13 AM
Such a romantic! Love under the lilac trees and magic moonlight! Lovely! Hugs ~ Kim
Pandit Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 6:02 AM
You set the stage for romance amid lilac trees and birds twittering. What comes next is magic of moonlight and kiss of lovers. What could be better! Excellent depiction, Victor.
M  Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 3:07 AM
Victor an absolutely lovely sweet tender poem. Debx
George Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 2:10 AM
A dreamy landscape, a pair of lovers , a moonlit night and at a distance, a beautiful cottage covered with flowering creepers. What more is needed. Indeed a wonderful romantic setting!
Horsman Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 1:34 AM
Victor your poetry read so sincere, so much love. Its a privilege to feel so positive after one views such splendid work.
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