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A Love Stroll In the Countryside

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Come my love, let's rest under the lilac trees, Hear the vast countryside sing with dewy grass, Birds fly high twittering their mating allure. I look only on your face so smooth, so class. It's now late afternoon and birds go to rest Let's enjoy the soft breeze that meander through Tall trees, swaying lightly in the evening and There a cottage , walls covered with flowers blue. There we'll have a high tea, a splendid cook's fare Till the sun disappears and darkness covers The terrain so green while a slice of red moon Ascend slowly, lightens us as two lovers We watch the bright landscape in magic moonlight. I feel her face resting on my shoulders, tired. We ascend for a good night's sleep in our room, We kiss and know we have what love we required.

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Date: 7/27/2022 2:50:00 PM
Hi Victor, before I go any further, a definite fave. I love this beautiful write. It did hold me in romantic raptures. I always love the way you merge nature with love. It always works in such a special way. Have a wonderful evening. Your friend always ..... Mike.
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Date: 6/27/2022 5:20:00 AM
Lilacs symbolize spring and renewal, but they had other meanings in different cultures. The Celtics saw lilacs as magical, and they symbolized old love in the Victorian age. 4. Each colour of lilac has its own specific meaning. White lilacs represent purity and innocence, while purple lilacs symbolize spirituality. I was curious about the symbolism of Lilacs after reading your lovely poem...Delice
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Date: 6/25/2022 4:44:00 AM
Ahh!! So romantic. There is beauty in the countryside and love as well. I am sure in the city also. I enjoyed reading your work. It was inspiring. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 6/24/2022 8:14:00 PM
A lovely love story in late afternoon lasting until the appearance of the magical moon. Beautiful poetry Victor… Belle
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Date: 6/24/2022 11:46:00 AM
Yes lets have an afternoon tea, I will bring the freshly made bread, always friend, never doubt I am there, :)
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Date: 6/24/2022 2:05:00 AM
Victor the romantic resurfaces!
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Date: 6/23/2022 3:14:00 PM
Young love, blessings in every thing they see when one is in love.
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Date: 6/23/2022 11:48:00 AM
How incredibly lovely! Romance amidst the lilac bushes as well as the enchantment of the moonlight! It is a blessing to feel so enthusiastic upon reading such a remarkable poem as you have created.
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Date: 6/23/2022 9:23:00 AM
A perfect day ends perfectly, under a romantic moon! I enjoyed reading this beautiful tale, Victor. :)
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Date: 6/23/2022 8:13:00 AM
Such a romantic! Love under the lilac trees and magic moonlight! Lovely! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 6/23/2022 6:02:00 AM
You set the stage for romance amid lilac trees and birds twittering. What comes next is magic of moonlight and kiss of lovers. What could be better! Excellent depiction, Victor.
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Date: 6/23/2022 3:07:00 AM
Victor an absolutely lovely sweet tender poem. Debx
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Date: 6/23/2022 2:10:00 AM
A dreamy landscape, a pair of lovers , a moonlit night and at a distance, a beautiful cottage covered with flowering creepers. What more is needed. Indeed a wonderful romantic setting!
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Date: 6/23/2022 1:34:00 AM
Victor your poetry read so sincere, so much love. Its a privilege to feel so positive after one views such splendid work.
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