A Love Song, At Last

Rain, 
in the inner forests
of your eyes

The heart of flowers
in your smile

The misty watchtower
is your lips

The sigh of surge 
in your fingertips

The rain flowing endlessly
over my head

My eyesight is hidden 
by the oozing of the rust
recollections and 
nightmares

I run to the day
but the rain never stops 
on my accursed soul

You close your eyes
as if the winter 
closes its cold text

The rhymes of babies 
toddles on the yard

You are the spider web
of sun rays
i am the broken pieces 
of sun stone of the atlas

I am walking
through the life
baring the cursed downpour 
over my wild brain
endlessly, eternally

When you look me 
with passion
The wind unties its knot
when you hum the lines 
of a love song
the sea suddenly startles
from the sleep
the wind starts its journey

Now the rain stops
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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January 1, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Gopak, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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September 2, 2008 at 3:55 PM
What a wonderful write your poem A Love Song, At Last is. No wonder it has been featured this week. Heartiest Congratulations. -Mohammad
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September 2, 2008 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations on "A Love Song, At Last" being featured. Vince
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August 31, 2008 at 5:48 PM
Very interesting style of writing - Congrats on being featured this week -Just loved the way this poem is laid out and flows so smoothly - God Bless
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August 31, 2008 at 5:46 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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August 31, 2008 at 5:42 PM
Interesting use of imagery in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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