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Melodies pour out from my soul. They float up towards the stars, swirl in and around clouds, swerve, spiral and swoop like swallows in search of their cozy homely branches of the tall stately cedar trees. Melodies of my passionate serenade, a dulcet harmonious canticle of praise, listen, they sing of my undying love for you, just for you and none other than you. For I was made for you as you were made for me. What can come between us, my loved one? Melodies of mine whirl glide and waltz, like a breeze among the thick-leaved trees, under the canopy of star-lit night sky and settle upon your luscious lips in a long endearing kiss.

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Date: 3/17/2022 10:42:00 AM
A beautiful tribute in a love song to your beloved in heaven Victor… Belle
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Date: 2/15/2022 1:20:00 PM
Quite a lovely penning Victor; this is a dynamic word-painting.
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Date: 2/15/2022 4:51:00 AM
An excellent love song, Victor, love how you wove your magical words :)
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Date: 2/13/2022 10:57:00 AM
A beautiful love song for your Valentine, Victor. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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Date: 2/13/2022 3:11:00 AM
Knowing you are made for each other let’s each feel confident with trust. I love your romantic poem Victor. A lovely photo too. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/12/2022 11:34:00 PM
Your romantic spirit certainly soars above the highest clouds when you pledge and share your love to the one you care for the most. Il-gurnata t-tajba!..ab
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Date: 2/11/2022 12:11:00 PM
A beautiful romantic write Victor, compliments the 14th Feb., a day to remember by couples worldwide. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/10/2022 8:27:00 PM
Perfect for Valentines my friend. In heaven it is heard .
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Date: 2/10/2022 6:37:00 PM
Wonderfully romantic Victor!
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Date: 2/10/2022 5:50:00 PM
Victory this is a perfect love song for Valentines Day. Enjoyed ...Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 2/10/2022 3:49:00 PM
Victor, your romantic love song, which floats up towards the stars, has so much magic and meaning, expressed in beautiful imagery. Blessings, Evelyn :)
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Date: 2/10/2022 2:41:00 PM
Victor, I agree with Tom, this one is oozing with romance. A perfect Valentine’s Day poem….Delice
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Date: 2/10/2022 10:51:00 AM
Oozing with romance Victor, your verse paints a very romantic scene. Tom
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Date: 2/10/2022 10:35:00 AM
Your romantic muse - imagery of melody!
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Date: 2/10/2022 5:58:00 AM
How beautiful!!! Such a beautiful romantic write ... Loved it...
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Date: 2/10/2022 5:53:00 AM
Victor, your words fall on the luscious mouth of your incredibly sincere and magnificent heart, assuaging a deep emotional feeling. An absolutely lovely romantic poem reveals that love provides no bounds and grows stronger as we age. And have a proclivity to soar to a notch higher in the sky. Excellent work.
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Date: 2/10/2022 5:38:00 AM
A magical, delightful love song. I like the metaphors that swirl, spiral, sing of love, glide and waltz. How romantic! A FAVE!!
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 2/10/2022 7:30:00 AM
Thanks for the fave.
Date: 2/10/2022 2:40:00 AM
Wow.... so romantic. With age your love attains newer dimensions and reach up to the heavens. Your words settle upon the luscious lips of your sweet heart as an endearing kiss !
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