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A Love Poem

There it laid dead in the metal pan, My heart removed from my chest. But being honest out of all the surgeons ...you were the best.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/18/2017 12:46:00 PM
Incredible... same as the later poem you wrote about your heart being torn out. The imagery is incredible, and the pain palpable, in so few words. I am stunned.
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Date: 12/21/2016 3:25:00 PM
Well written, Tricia
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Tricia Campese
Date: 12/22/2016 8:15:00 AM
Thank you!

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