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A Love Poem

The old saying, “my heart skips a beat” Held no meaning until now I'm living proof it happens every day When I get a message, KERPOW! Heart starts pumping a mile a minute Can't focus to press the right key Eventually I'm able to find it though And her loving words I see Head starts spinning, fingers tremble Reading the first loving line Just as I imagined, her words excite me Must respond to her love in kind So I type, retype, and type again I'm pretty damn happy with the end But read it through a couple more times More changes then I hit the 'send' It's gone and I worry, did I use the right words Does she understand what I'm saying Then anxiously wait, it seems like forever Till she returns the love I'm displaying Starts all over, my heart skips a beat Life had no meaning till now I'm living proof, it happens every day Never been so happily endowed! © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 6/18/2014 8:33:00 AM
Hey Jack! I got thru! Finally! Better grab it while I can. Dragon's laughing... It's mosquito season here... And when they get in the house, they leave everybody alone and head straight to me. Hubby was outside cleaning the gutters and not one bite. Dragon... Not one bite... I ran to let the dogs out and wham! 3 bites... When they sing 'What the world needs now is love sweet love' I don't think they were singing about mosquitoes... But the mosquitoes love that song! Honestly! Share it guys!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/18/2014 8:41:00 AM
Hey! Mosquitos have their rights too you know! They're just trying to survive like all us guys! Those blood sucking little varmints! LOL XOXOX
Date: 6/16/2014 11:19:00 AM
Aww you old romantic love it Jack. Hugs as ever Jan xxxx
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Date: 6/16/2014 3:20:00 PM
Love ya my dear sis! No matter my age, love is still number one!!! Huggsies, your bro XOXOXOX
Date: 6/16/2014 9:57:00 AM
Are you up to no good again, Jack? Lol, I'm gonna tell. Keep that heart pumping. You may need it haha
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/16/2014 10:04:00 AM
I'm old but I ain't dead!!! LOL XOXOX

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