A Love Poem

In the beginning, before time began,
before God envisioned the concept of man,
as God was pondering His incredible plan,
we stood together, hand in hand.

Before there were stars, or planets, or moons,
in silence and darkness all drifted, immune,
before God had cast the very first rune,
we stood together, completely in tune.

And when it's all over, once God is done,
when there's no moons or planets or suns,
like the beginning, before time had begun,
we'll stand together, together as one.



©2010 DanielleWhite
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rahaman Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 6:55 AM
great poem. love should be like this. perfect
Gorelick Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 8:19 PM
Its a blessing to find just the right hand. Wonderful piece..he must love it. BG
Devonshire Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 12:49 PM
Now this is a love that truly transcends time, Danielle. Welcome back! It's so good to see you posting again. We missed reading your work. Hope you are feeling better and I'm so glad you have this terrific guy standing by for you. Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 12:40 PM
What a beautiful tribute to your marriage vows! This is a keeper, you should have it framed! Nicely done, Danielle! ~ Love, Carrie (and ps...hope you are feeling well :)
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