A Love of Mine

I went to see a love of mine today.
She stood in a wonderful red patterned caftan-like dress.
Delightful red embroidery at the throat.
She smiled, pleased, as I was, that I was there.
Her brown hair cascaded down each side of her face over her shoulders,
feathering out a welcome
Her care bespoken face, as always, carried her character, her loveliness through pain,
her ability to have faced pitted despair and found that she still wanted life.

I love seeing her face.  
It somehow soothes me,
allows me to feel like I’m alright for the moment.
as though softness and tenderness do exist for my soul.
Intimacy is in her face.
Or perhaps it mirrors mine.
I don’t know.
But I know she is a love of mine.

Dec 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 12/28/2011 4:59:00 PM
A tender way to describe love...much enjoyed. Gwendolen
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Date: 12/26/2011 6:55:00 PM
um, yeah, right on and write on bro, namaste~N
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Fitz Cook
Date: 12/26/2011 7:06:00 PM
This is about a dear friend of R. and me who has made a loving life out of much heart-break. Glad your home safely.
Date: 12/24/2011 9:26:00 AM
Thanks for reading my stuff, Fitz. A beautiful and simple expression of love and sensitive attention. Happy Holidays. Love, daver
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Date: 12/24/2011 3:59:00 AM
Wow! A beautiful poemfor a beautiful person an so well and artfully presented! Always, Laura
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