A Love Now Lost.

Beautiful….. Amazing…… gorgeous……. Angel……

There are no words that can describe who you used to be,
Your eyes shone like the moon with a tint of starlight,
Your smile and laughter made me weak in the knees,
You loved everything we did and who I was, 
I loved you for who you made me, the way I felt when you was around,
I loved you because you were mine, we were so young.
I left you all by yourself, not even a good bye.

But time and departure take there toll on one such beauty as yourself,
I found you again but life had changed you, we were older now, in our teens,
Nether the less, the love was still there but now it was forbidden,
We both had new loves, Although  feelings flowed like leafs in the wind, 
I wanted you more than ever, To hold you, to feel your warmth like a summers air , 
To show you how much I needed you, But again I left you never knowing how I felt.

Time passed, I found and lost love many times as did your self,
I found you again but life had worn you out, we were older now, young adults,
You had built your self a life, boyfriend, child, my turning up was a shock,
We both had problems in our life’s, needed someone to talk to, a shoulder to cry upon,
It was then we shared our first kiss together, I regained my hope but coward in my shame,
I ran in depression and confusion, and I left.

Five years on, we met and talked recently, you felt nothing for me anymore,
The moon and starlight was gone from your eyes, your smile had disappeared,
I felt nothing from you, you was gone….. You were no longer the woman I loved,
We are not in love anymore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/15/2009 2:52:00 PM
Thank you for commenting on my poetry I love the way you write. You put so much heart into your work. Beautifully written and so sad. Smiles from Lolita
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