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A Love Lost

Caught inside a painting, A Rembrandt, made of her family's hopes and dreams Searching for happiness, Within a two dimensional canvas, little scope there seems Outside the colours, Someone captivated by her beauty, hearing her empty screams Only for the key, Longing to be outside, he opens the door and beams Filled with intrepidation, Beckoning “come outside”, his love for her it teems She turns away, For others she must stay, hiding from her dreams.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/27/2024 12:08:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/5/2016 3:48:00 PM

Infectuous Romantic,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA

Skat A

Date: 4/16/2013 4:43:00 PM

I like your Infectuous Romantic poet name. . Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT