Notes About The Poem

A Love Like Ours

Swimmingly
        that's how we flow.
                We're so
               easygoing.
         Love is good to us!
               I love you
                  just as
             much as you
                 love me.
                  Fluidly,
             we flow just...
     like a mountain stream;
      deeper than the ocean
                      is...
           a love like ours!


                  (Yalto)


BRIAN'S CHOICE X,any form,any theme
Contest Judged:  5/27/2020 (Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by Brian Strand 

 "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables
Date written: 09/28/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 1:57 PM
Hello Edward ibh, this oem you created is beautifully done.Have a nice day my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 2:15 PM
Thank you, Darlene:-)
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