A Love Like Ours
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Swimmingly
that's how we flow.
We're so
easygoing.
Love is good to us!
I love you
just as
much as you
love me.
Fluidly,
we flow just...
like a mountain stream;
deeper than the ocean
is...
a love like ours!
(Yalto)
BRIAN'S CHOICE X,any form,any theme
Contest Judged: 5/27/2020 (Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by Brian Strand
"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables
Date written: 09/28/2019
Copyright © Edward Ibeh | Year Posted 2019
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